Anyone can comment on my YuGiOh tourny deck? imma going for

My Tournament Deck 1:
axe of despair[s]
mystical space typhoon[s]
curse of darkness[t]
gravity bind[t]
mirror force[t]
cost down[s]
swords of revealing light[s]
magic cylinder[t]
jinzo[m][2400/1500]
giant trunade[s]
morphing jar[m][700/800]
sangan[m][1000/600]
breaker the magical warrior[m][1600(1900)/1000]
apprentice magicianx2[m][400/800]
magic drain[t]
torrential tribute[t]
dark magician[m][2500/2100]
dark magician girl[m][2000/1700]
winged kuriboh[m][300/200]
legendary fiend[m][1500(+700 every standby)/1800]
reckless greedx2[t]
trap jammer[t]
twin-headed behemoth[m][1500(1000)/1200(1000)]
lightning vortex[s]
big shield gardna[m][100/2600]
nutrient Z[s]
brain control[s]
sage's stone[s]
spirit reaper[m][300/200]
united we stand[s]
mage power[s]
dark mirror force[t]
magical dimension[s]
the dark door[s]
widespread ruin[t]
ultimate offering[t]
reverse trap[t]
cyber stein[m][700/500]
marsmellon[m][300/500]
final countdown[s]
life absorbing machine[t]
grave keeper's servant[s]
copycat[m][0/0]
marshmallow's glasses[s]
nightmare wheelx3[t]
secret barrel[t]
bad reaction to simochi[t]
dark dreadroute[m][4000/4000]
ordeal of a traveler[t]
the eye of truth[t]
swift gaia the fierce knight[m][2300/2100]
giant germx3[m][1000/100]

Legend:
Monster(M)
Trap(T)
Magic(S)
Atk/Def[a/d]

Red colour cards: Ante for tournament(sad to lose em though if i lose the game)

good variation
here's a tip
Add a field card to your benefit

Cheers and Good Luck
GT

Hmmm. Not bad

donno...

21 M in 52 cards. Aren't the odds low for getting a monster still a little bit low?

Shouldn't there's be a 50:50 ratio M to S&T?

Also do tournaments not use the Advanced format rules?

http://entertainment.upperdeck.com/yugioh/en/news/strategy.aspx?aid=4658

Marshmellon and Spirit Reaper are a good combo but you may need a bit for defence for the tactic such as Wall of Releaving Light

ah well safan im kinda into bringing enemies down to their feet with more traps than monster cards but oh well it works kinda well... so far...
saw 1 guy with this...
STEP 1: Uses painful choice brings out exodia
STEP 2: enemy picks head
STEP 3: rest goes into graveyard...
STEP 4: Contract with exodia and out comes necross....
STEP 5: GG